Nice work, and I really enjoyed the theme of things that go "boom." That was a clever way to be able to mix-and-match old and new technologies in a single setting.
I particularly enjoyed the very old grenade (round, with the tube on top) and the digital display. And I really liked the "old, dirty, waxy paper" on the three sticks of dynamite; I thought that looked excellent.
I have two "construction comments" for you (one for each Larsen, perhaps):
a) Rope... This is from Picture #4...
The rope handle on the large box would benefit from a
displacement map so you see the actual "lumpiness" of the twisted rope along the edges. I'm guessing it only used a bump/height/normal map but not an actual displacement map. .
2) Gunpowder... This is from Picture #7, and especially #8...
The gunpowder looks too smooth to me. I know you have pits in it, but I think you need some
finer-grained normal detail on it. For lack of a better description, it reminds me of a round cake that just came out of the oven; it is fairly smooth on the rounded top surface.
Nice work, though, and I really enjoyed viewing it (several times). Thank you very much for sharing.
